A for effort here. I see what you’re trying to do, but this is poorly executed. You’re trying to drop the kids in, all to the same scene, looking the same way, and clearly our little child on the far right, who is not listening to what’s going on, is more than likely the problem child.
I feel the image is lacking expression, emotion, connection. Sometimes, as we're doing critiques, we're looking at the obvious. We're looking at lighting, we're looking at posing. Here, I'm just struggling with the connection of our subject. Maybe that's the goal, but these are things you want to be looking at.
I'm seeing what I'm going to assume it's just more of a street photography shot, a photojournalistic shot. But look at the end of the day, just because it's street photography doesn't mean that the rules of photography go out the window.
In this video, Sal is on-location in Iceland with Miss Iceland. In this scene, he was looking for one thing: a gorgeous headshot with a custom made wreath. For gear, he used a Profoto B1 and OCF Portable Beauty Dish. A super simple set up with stunning results.
https://www.youtube.com/embed/sl8LEKkaYL4 The images: Click to enlarge Image #1 This feels like a snapshot. I'm not looking at it through the…
I love this image, let's call this "Til Death Do Us Part.” It's got that romantic feeling, and I love the almost-kiss. This is a really good image. Immediately, I want to jump into what we can do to make this image better. Let’s start with the bright spots.
The first thing I see in this photo is the chair. It looks like they took a picture of a back of a chair. Here’s the deal, I’m always going to acknowledge when I’m not sure what the goal is of an image, and this is one of those images.
I can’t tell if this is a senior shot or a Quinceañera, but it’s a beautiful shot. In and of itself, this is a strong shot but let’s dig into what we can do to make it better.
https://www.youtube.com/embed/HxUwt9ctvdA The images: Click to enlarge Image #1 Let’s take a look at the first image. This looks like it’s…
https://youtu.be/dbbun2Ktu_g The images: Click to enlarge Image #1 First image up. This is a really nice image, but it could…